Thursday, December 16, 2010

You've Got A Friend

By James Taylor and Carole King


When you're down and troubled and you need a helping hand
and nothing, whoa, nothing is going right.
Close your eyes and think of me and soon I will be there
to brighten up even your darkest nights.


You just call out my name, and you know where ever I am
I'll come running to see you again.
Winter, spring, summer, or fall, all you have to do is call and I'll be there, yeah, yeah,
you've got a friend.


If the sky above you should turn dark and full of clouds
and that old north wind should begin to blow,
keep your head together and call my name out loud.
Soon I will be knocking upon your door.
You just call out my name, and you know where ever I am
I'll come running to see you again.
Winter, spring, summer, or fall, all you have to do is call and I'll be there.
Hey, ain't it good to know that you've got a friend? People can be so cold.
They'll hurt you and desert you. Well, they'll take your soul if you let them,
oh yeah, but don't you let them.
You just call out my name, and you know where ever I am
I'll come running to see you again.
Winter, spring, summer, or fall, all you have to do is call, Lord, I'll be there, yeah, yeah,
you've got a friend. You've got a friend.
Ain't it good to know you've got a friend. Ain't it good to know you've got a friend.
Oh, yeah, yeah, you've got a friend.

Sunday, December 5, 2010

Final Draft (Essay #4)

Abstinence Based Sex Education
Sex education is a process of giving knowledge and forming attitudes and beliefs about sex, sexual identity, relationships and intimacy ("Pros and Cons Of Sex Education."). Educators, parents, etc. have strong opinions when it comes to teaching their children about sex. Abstinence based sex education courses are popular throughout public and private schools. But is making sex education programs abstinence based sending the right message? Parents need to take control of the sex education programs to ensure that their children gain the best knowledge possible. Sex programs in middle and high schools should support abstinence but also teach the teenagers how to protect themselves from unexpected pregnancy; the more knowledge they know the more they can be protecting their futures.
Teenagers are no more likely to be sexually active having been taught about protection such as pills, condoms, shots or patches, etc. then they are having been taught abstinence based education. “Studies show that providing information about contraception does not increase teen sexual activity. At the same time, teens who received only abstinence education were no more likely to abstain. And when they did stray, without education about birth control, they were more likely to get pregnant” ("Pros and Cons Of Sex Education."). If not educated by the schools a lot of teens learn from other sources about sex and protection such as family, the media, internet, books, advertisement and even friends who may have the wrong facts as well. The Centers of Disease Control and Prevention (CDC) conducted a survey finding out 46% of all high school students reported ever having had sexual intercourse, 61% of sexually active students reported using a condom the last time they had sex and 20% of sexually active students reported using birth control pills the last time they had sex ("Fast Facts").
Leaving the students in the dark will not help them in the future. Leaving them in the dark could potentially endanger the teens of not being aware of what they have at risk when having unprotected sex; not just risking pregnancy but receiving any type of sexually transmitted diseases (STD) such as Herpes, Crabs louse, HPV, HIV, etc. When a teenaged girl, any woman at that, becomes pregnant and has a sexually transmitted disease not just the female is in serious danger but so is her unborn child. A pregnant woman with a sexually transmitted disease can infect her baby before, during, and/or after the child is born ("Sexually Transmitted Diseases (STDs)"). In addition to possible infection to the baby, early labor or early rupture of the membranes around the baby in the uterus can occur. Yes, this can still occur if teens are fully taught about non-abstinence based sexual education but it would not hurt to each to help prevent this from happening. Just in case, pregnant women, expectedly or unexpectedly, should ask their doctors about getting tested for sexually transmitted diseases. Some doctors do not routinely perform these tests so asking is the patients’ responsibility. Teen pregnancy and birth rates have declined throughout the past years but the U.S. still remains the highest rates of STIs, sexually transmitted infections; STDs and teen pregnancy of any industrialized country in the world (Collins M.P.P, Chris). Around 3.75 million teenagers will contract an STI while one out of three will get a disease or infection by the age of twenty-four (Collins M.P.P, Chris). STIs can lead to many things in addition to a health issue such as significant personal, social and economic consequences. If not properly educated about or treated an untreated or improperly treated STI can turn into a Pelvis inflammatory disease which is responsible for at least thirty percent of infertility among U.S. women. STIs can cause mental illness, spontaneous abortions, still birth, and make women two to five times more vulnerable to HIV and other health problems (Collins M.P.P, Chris). Without the knowledge how are teens supposed to know?
A national study by the National Campaign to Prevent Teen and Unplanned Pregnancy showed an average of seventy out of one thousand United States teenaged girls became pregnant in the year 2005. In Maryland sixty-five out of one thousand teenaged girls became pregnant and one hundred sixty-five out of one thousand teenaged girls became pregnant in the Nation’s capital; Washington, D.C. ("Teen Pregnancy Rates in the United States”). With teens knowing and talking about contraception or condom use, abortion and knowing about sexually transmitted diseases and HIV there can be a possibility that these numbers will go down; yet there is also a possibility of them staying the same or even increasing which will only “prove” that the people against non-abstinence based sex education “right”.
Abstinence based sex education promotes no sex before marriage, does not acknowledge that a lot of teens will become sexually activeAbstinence based sex education promotes no sex before marriage, does not acknowledge that a lot of teens will become sexually active, does not teach contraception or condom usage, avoid discussions of abortion and talks about sexually transmitted diseases and HIV as reasons to remain abstinent. In 1996 an Abstinence only curriculum welfare reform act was activated stating that $50 million annually for five years to states for abstinence only programs. Legislation required that “abstinence from sexual activity outside marriage as the expected standard from all school-age children”, “a mutually faithful monogamous relationship in the context of marriage is the expected standard of sexual activity” and “sexual activity outside the context of marriage is likely to have harmful psychological and physical effects” would be taught (Collins M.P.P, Chris). This made wanting abstinence based educated a better deal and abstinence only sex education rose nearly 3000% from 1996 to 2001.
Teens can and will choose their sexual behavior; it is their life and with becoming young adults they will exercise their rights to choose. Research shows how those decisions are made greatly having to do with the world surroundings. The communities, economic, geographic and historical can be involved as well.
There are many groups and people who are strongly against the whole contraception and abstinence based sex education courses. Some of these organizations include SIECUS, Advocates for Youth, and the American Academy of Pediatrics, the American College of Obstetricians and Gynecologists, the American Medical Association, the American Public Health Association, the National Education Association, the National Medical Association, the National School Boards Association, and the Society for Adolescent Medicine (Collins M.P.P, Chris).
SIECUS states that comprehensive school based sexuality education that is appropriate to students’ age, developmental level, and cultural background should be an important part of the education program at every age. The organization defines a comprehensive sexuality education program as one that “respects the diversity of values and beliefs represented in the community and will complement and augment the sexuality education children receive from their families.”
Some believe abstinence based education courses are becoming more and more effective. A study released in Archives of Pediatrics and Adolescent Medicine researchers followed throughout two years students in separate groups. These students began the study in only the grades of sixth and seventh grade. In one group the focus was abstinence; in the other group, the group was taught contraception and safe sex. Two years later, the researchers talked to the students again finding out one half of the students learning about contraception and safe sex were now having sex. While only one third of the group who focused on abstinence were having sex (Muir, David). Researchers stated it was how the topic was approached not just giving information about abstinence. In this specific study, the teachers did not take it as far as going into religion, etc. The course purposely stayed away from the religion, morality and marriage reasoning’s on why abstinence gets thumbs up. The teachers did not preach about waiting for sex until marriage or discouraging condom usage (Muir, David).
Abstinence only based education is one way to educate teenaged students about sex then there is the only way by teaching the students about contraception, condoms and sexually transmitted diseases. Many people do not agree that students should be taught about contraception since those people believe if students are taught about the non-abstinence ways the students will be more likely to be sexually active. Teens are going to have sex if that’s what those individuals decide – it has nothing to do with being taught abstinence based or not. Teens need to be taught about contraception so the teens will know how to protect themselves from the sexually transmitted disease or infections, and unwanted pregnancies. Futures are in state if students are not educated right. Stated on television channel MTV on television show 16 and pregnant, “teen pregnancy is 100% preventable.” However, having the right information is necessary.
Cited Work
Collins M.P.P., Chris, Priya Alagiri, J.D., and Todd Summers. "Abstinence Only vs. Comprehensive Sex Education." AIDS Policy Research Center & Center for AIDS Prevention Studies. Progessive Health Partners, 03 2002. Web. 5 Dec 2010. <http://ari.ucsf.edu/science/reports/abstinence.pdf>.
 "Fast Facts." The National Campaign. The National Campaign to Prevent Teen Pregnancy, June 2010. Web. 14 Nov 2010. < http://www.thenationalcampaign.org/resources/pdf/FastFacts_YRBS2009.pdf>.
Fitzpatrick, Diane. "The Pros and Cons of Abstinence Only Education." Life123. Life123, Inc., 2010. Web. 11 Nov 2010. <http://www.life123.com/parenting/tweens-teens/teens-sex/the-pros-and-cons-of-abstinence-only-education.shtml>.
Muir, David, and Hanna Siegel. "'Abstinence-Only' Education Gets a Boost." ABC News. ABC News, 02 02 2010. Web. 5 Dec 2010. <http://abcnews.go.com/WN/study-abstinence-works/story?id=9731048>.
"Pros and Cons Of Sex Education." iloveindia.com. iloveindia.com, 2010. Web. 11 Nov 2010. <http://lifestyle.iloveindia.com/lounge/pros-and-cons-of-sex-education-9472.html>.
"Sexually Transmitted Diseases (STDs)." Centers for Disease Control and Prevention. Centers for Disease Control and Prevention, 14 09 2010. Web. 1 Dec 2010. <http://www.cdc.gov/STD/pregnancy/default.htm>.
"Teen Pregnancy Rates in the United States." The National Campaign. The National Campaign to Prevent Teen Pregnancy, 26 Jan 2010. Web. 14 Nov 2010. <http://www.thenationalcampaign.org/national-data/pdf/STBYST05_Preg%20Only.pdf>.
"Teenage Quotes." ThinkExist.com. ThinkExist, 1999-2010. Web. 16 Nov 2010. <http://thinkexist.com/quotes/with/keyword/teenage/>.
"U.S. Teen Sexual Activity." The Henry J. Kaiser Family Foundation. The Henry J. Kaiser Family Foundation, Jan 2005. Web. 14 Nov 2010. http://www.kff.org/youthhivstds/upload/U-S-Teen-Sexual-Activity-Fact-Sheet.pdf>.

Final Rough Draft (Essay #4)

Abstinence Based Sex Education

Sex education is a process of giving knowledge and forming attitudes and beliefs about sex, sexual identity, relationships and intimacy ("Pros and Cons Of Sex Education."). Educators, parents, etc. have strong opinions when it comes to teaching their children about sex. Abstinence based sex education courses are popular throughout public and private schools. But is making sex education programs abstinence based sending the right message? Parents need to take control of the sex education programs to ensure that their children gain the best knowledge possible. Sex programs in middle and high schools should support abstinence but also teach the teenagers how to protect themselves from unexpected pregnancy; the more knowledge they know the more they can be protecting their futures.
Teenagers are no more likely to be sexually active having been taught about protection such as pills, condoms, shots or patches, etc. then they are having been taught abstinence based education. “Studies show that providing information about contraception does not increase teen sexual activity. At the same time, teens who received only abstinence education were no more likely to abstain. And when they did stray, without education about birth control, they were more likely to get pregnant” ("Pros and Cons Of Sex Education."). If not educated by the schools a lot of teens learn from other sources about sex and protection such as family, the media, internet, books, advertisement and even friends who may have the wrong facts as well. The Centers of Disease Control and Prevention (CDC) conducted a survey finding out 46% of all high school students reported ever having had sexual intercourse, 61% of sexually active students reported using a condom the last time they had sex and 20% of sexually active students reported using birth control pills the last time they had sex ("Fast Facts").
Leaving the students in the dark will not help them in the future. Leaving them in the dark could potentially endanger the teens of not being aware of what they have at risk when having unprotected sex; not just risking pregnancy but receiving any type of sexually transmitted diseases (STD) such as Herpes, Crabs louse, HPV, HIV, etc. When a teenaged girl, any woman at that, becomes pregnant and has a sexually transmitted disease not just the female is in serious danger but so is her unborn child. A pregnant woman with an sexually transmitted disease can infect her baby before, during, and/or after the child is born ("Sexually Transmitted Diseases (STDs)"). In addition to possible infection to the baby, early labor or early rupture of the membranes around the baby in the uterus can occur. Yes, this can still occur if teens are fully taught about non-abstinence based sexual education but it would not hurt to each to help prevent this from happening. Just in case, pregnant women, expectedly or unexpectedly, should ask their doctors about getting tested for sexually transmitted diseases. Some doctors do not routinely perform these tests so asking is the patients’ responsibility. Teen pregnancy and birth rates have declined throughout the past years but the U.S still remains the highest rates of STIs, sexually transmitted diseases; STDs and teen pregnancy of any industrialized country in the world (Collins M.P.P, Chris). Around 3.75 million teenagers will contract an STI while one out of three will get a disease or infection by the age of twenty-four (Collins M.P.P, Chris). STIs can lead to many things in addition to a health issue such as significant personal, social and economic consequences. If not properly educated about or treated an untreated or improperly treated STI can turn into a Pelvis inflammatory disease which is responsible for at least thirty percent of infertility among U.S women. STIs can cause mental illness, spontaneous abortions, still birth, and make women two to five times more vulnerable to HIV and other health problems (Collins M.P.P, Chris). Without the knowledge how are teens supposed to know?
A national study by the National Campaign to Prevent Teen and Unplanned Pregnancy showed an average of seventy out of one thousand United States teenaged girls became pregnant in the year 2005. In Maryland sixty-five out of one thousand teenaged girls became pregnant and one hundred sixty-five out of one thousand teenaged girls became pregnant ("Teen Pregnancy Rates in the United States”). With teens knowing and talking about contraception or condom use, abortion and knowing about sexually transmitted diseases and HIV there can be a possibility that these numbers will go down; yet there is also a possibility of them staying the same or even increasing which will only “prove” that the people against non-abstinence based sex education “right”.
Abstinence based sex education promote abstinence from sex, do not acknowledge that a lot of teenagers will become sexually active, do not teach contraception or condom usage, avoid discussions of abortion and talks about sexually transmitted diseases and HIV as reasons to remain abstinent. In 1996 an Abstinence only curriculum welfare reform act was activated stating that $50 million annually for five years to states for abstinence only programs. Legislation required that “abstinence from sexual activity outside marriage as the expected standard from all school-age children”, “a mutually faithful monogamous relationship in the context of marriage is the expected standard of sexual activity” and “sexual activity outside the context of marriage is likely to have harmful psychological and physical effects” would be taught (Collins M.P.P, Chris). This made wanting abstinence based educated a better deal and abstinence only sex education rose nearly 3000% from 1996 to 2001.
Teens can and will choose their sexual behavior; it is their life and with becoming young adults they will exercise their rights to choose. Research shows how those decisions are made greatly having to do with the world surroundings. The communities, economic, geographic and historical can be involved as well.
There are many groups and people who are strongly against the whole contraception and abstinence based sex education courses. Some of these organizations include SIECUS, Advocates for Youth, and the American Academy of Pediatrics, the American College of Obstetricians and Gynecologists, the American Medical Association, the American Public Health Association, the National Education Association, the National Medical Association, the National School Boards Association, and the Society for Adolescent Medicine (Collins M.P.P, Chris).
SIECUS states that comprehensive school based sexuality education that is appropriate to students’ age, developmental level, and cultural background should be an important part of the education program at every age. The organization defines a comprehensive sexuality education program as one that “respects the diversity of values and beliefs represented in the community and will complement and augment the sexuality education children receive from their families.”
Cited Work
Collins M.P.P., Chris, Priya Alagiri, J.D., and Todd Summers. "Abstinence Only vs. Comprehensive Sex Education." AIDS Policy Research Center & Center for AIDS Prevention Studies. Progessive Health Partners, 03 2002. Web. 5 Dec 2010. <http://ari.ucsf.edu/science/reports/abstinence.pdf>.
 "Fast Facts." The National Campaign. The National Campaign to Prevent Teen Pregnancy, June 2010. Web. 14 Nov 2010. < http://www.thenationalcampaign.org/resources/pdf/FastFacts_YRBS2009.pdf>.
Fitzpatrick, Diane. "The Pros and Cons of Abstinence Only Education." Life123. Life123, Inc., 2010. Web. 11 Nov 2010. <http://www.life123.com/parenting/tweens-teens/teens-sex/the-pros-and-cons-of-abstinence-only-education.shtml>.
"Pros and Cons Of Sex Education." iloveindia.com. iloveindia.com, 2010. Web. 11 Nov 2010. <http://lifestyle.iloveindia.com/lounge/pros-and-cons-of-sex-education-9472.html>.
"Sexually Transmitted Diseases (STDs)." Centers for Disease Control and Prevention. Centers for Disease Control and Prevention, 14 09 2010. Web. 1 Dec 2010. <http://www.cdc.gov/STD/pregnancy/default.htm>.
"Teen Pregnancy Rates in the United States." The National Campaign. The National Campaign to Prevent Teen Pregnancy, 26 Jan 2010. Web. 14 Nov 2010. <http://www.thenationalcampaign.org/national-data/pdf/STBYST05_Preg%20Only.pdf>.
"Teenage Quotes." ThinkExist.com. ThinkExist, 1999-2010. Web. 16 Nov 2010. <http://thinkexist.com/quotes/with/keyword/teenage/>.
"U.S. Teen Sexual Activity." The Henry J. Kaiser Family Foundation. The Henry J. Kaiser Family Foundation, Jan 2005. Web. 14 Nov 2010. <http://www.kff.org/youthhivstds/upload/U-S-Teen-Sexual-Activity-Fact-Sheet.pdf>.

Tuesday, November 30, 2010

Rough Draft (Essay #4)

Sex education is a process of giving knowledge and forming attitudes and beliefs about sex, sexual identity, relationships and intimacy ("Pros and Cons Of Sex Education."). Educators, parents, etc. have strong opinions when it comes to teaching their children about sex. Abstinence based sex education courses are popular throughout public and private schools. But is making sex education programs abstinence based sending the right message? Parents need to take control of the sex education programs to ensure that their children gain the best knowledge possible. Sex programs in middle and high schools should support abstinence but also teach the teenagers how to protect themselves from unexpected pregnancy; the more knowledge they know the more they can be protected.
Teenagers are no more likely to be sexually active having been taught about protection such as pills, condoms, shots or patches, etc. then they are having been taught abstinence based education. “Studies show that providing information about contraception does not increase teen sexual activity. At the same time, teens who received only abstinence education were no more likely to abstain. And when they did stray, without education about birth control, they were more likely to get pregnant” ("Pros and Cons Of Sex Education."). If not educated by the schools a lot of teens learn from other sources about sex and protection such as family, the media, internet, books, advertisement and even friends who may have the wrong facts as well. The Centers of Disease Control and Prevention (CDC) conducted a survey finding out 46% of all high school students reported ever having had sexual intercourse, 61% of sexually active students reported using a condom the last time they had sex and 20% of sexually active students reported using birth control pills the last time they had sex ("Fast Facts").

Sunday, November 21, 2010

Research Outline (Essay #4)

Introduction/thesis - Sex programs in high schools should support abstinence but also teach the teenagers how to protect themselves from unexpected pregnancy; the more knowledge they know the more they can protect.
Talk about:
1. Sexual activity
2. Not educated about protection = more risk for pregnancy.
3. Statistics.
(All will have anothers opposite opinion.)

Body -
“Studies show that providing information about contraception does not increase teen sexual activity. At the same time, teens who received only abstinence education were no more likely to abstain. And when they did stray, without education about birth control, they were more likely to get pregnant.”


- Sexual activty.
- Not educated about protection = more risk for pregnancy.

- Statistics.

Conclusion -
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Wednesday, November 10, 2010

Research Paper (Essay #4)

THESIS: Sex education programs in high schools should support abstinence but also teach children how to protect themselves from unexpected pregnancy. 

 Sex education classes (More of protecting against pregnancy, less on abstinence.)
  Teens are going to have sex.

Final Revision (Essay #3)

The Blizzard of 2009
            During the winter season of 2009, the East Coast of the United States experienced a record-breaking snowfall. Up and down the coast, nearly twelve states received two feet of snow or more in one snow fall (Stark). On December, 18, 2009 a moist, low pressure system in the Gulf of Mexico began moving towards the east coast while high pressure kept to the north of the Mid-Atlantic. This caused snow to fall the evening of the 18th in the Mid-Atlantic. The snow continued throughout the following day. The blizzard strengthened while moving north resulting in heavier snowfall from Maryland to Maine. It covered the region in 16-22 inches of snow. This one snowfall roughly matched average annual snowfall totals of many major cities (Beaven). As a result of the blizzard of 2009, schooling and jobs, communities, and holidays throughout the eastern coast were affected in many ways.
            For many, the blizzard of 2009 put life on pause. People were not able to get through the door to go to work or even let children continue with their schooling. With workers clearing the sidewalks, roadways, and highways while citizens weren’t allowed to venture out, plenty of days of school were canceled while employees of various job sites weren’t able to show up to work. Many communities went without power for days at a time making it unsafe also for businesses, schools and driving to occur. The Frederick County Public School’s policy states that when the roads aren’t safe for the children the, “Transportation Department may recommend to the superintendent of schools or designee that all schools dismiss early,” or be closed (Office of the Superintendent). Meaning if the roads, sidewalks, and parking lots aren’t cleared then no school for Frederick County Public Schools.
            Unfortunately, during bad weather, such as the blizzard of 2009, accidents on the roadways and airline delays are to be expected throughout the communities. Virginia, alone, blamed the two feet of snow for at least five deaths, thousands of traffic accidents, closed roads and airports, deserted stores on the weekend, and power outages before Christmas (Stark). McKinsey Harris, a commuter from western Virginia to Washington, D.C; stated, “I’ve seen overturned cars, tractor trailers sliding off the road. I had no idea how to handle this weather and I have now been stuck in it for almost 24 hours” (Stark). After the storm moved out, unplowed roads with blowing snow continued to make driving very dangerous for the next couple of weeks. Police responded to more than 2,900 traffic accidents and disabled vehicles in Virginia, and nearly 1,000 drivers were stranded on multiple highways. Rescue workers were called to drive along side roads offering drivers/riders transportation to nearby shelters (Stark). Authorities throughout the Washington, D.C., Virginia and Maryland areas, ordered residents to stay home to give public crews a chance to plow roads and major highways for safety reasons. Many still ventured out into the wonderland causing more work for the workers; endangering themselves and others around them. Airports closed or delayed flights leaving many air travelers stranded and sleeping on terminal floors hoping for a flight. In a lot of cases, airlines could not promise everyone would be home on time for the holidays.
            Due to the road way conditions and canceled/delayed flights, the 2009 holiday season was altered for many travelers either traveling to or trying to escape the east coast. Airports outside the storm zone were affected as badly as the airports within the zone. The many airports weren’t able to receive flights from or able to land in the east coast (Stark). The Port Authority of New York and New Jersey stated, “… about 1,200 flights were canceled Saturday and Sunday at the New York region’s three major airports” (Stark). Imagine how many flights were canceled throughout the entire country as well.
            The blizzard of 2009 was just the starting point of the 2009-10 winter season for a lot of the United States. A couple months later another blizzard hit the East Coast adding to the piles of snow remaining from the previous blizzard in 2009. Yet again, the cycle of the blizzard effects started all over again. Schooling and jobs, communities and holidays were affected but the blizzard of 2009 will always be in the memories of many.

Work Cited:
Azpiri, John. "Blizzard 2009 Snow Totals: New England, DC, NY, NJ Snow Totals." NowPublic. NowPublic, 20 12 2009. Web. 19 Oct 2010. <http://www.nowpublic.com/environment/blizzard-2009-snow-totals-new-england-dc-ny-nj-snow-totals-2541969.html>.
Beaven, Colin. "Historic Mid-Atlantic Snowstorms and Placing the Blizzard of 2009 in Perspective." Colin Beaven (2009-10): n. pag. Web. 18 Oct 2010. <http://www.colinbeaven.com/Writing/More/Historic%20Snowstorms/Historic%20Snowstorms.html>.
“Office of the Superintendent.” "FCPS." FCPS. Frederick County Public Schools, 04 02 2009. Web. 27 Oct 2010. <http://apps.fcps.org/dept/legal/regulations.cfm?152910821132356427Nav=|&NodeID=367>.
Stark, Lisa, John Ryan, and Michael S. James. "Home for Christmas? Travel Still Snarled After Deadly Winter Storm." ABC News (2009): n. pag. Web. 19 Oct 2010. http://abcnews.go.com/Travel/Weather/blizzard-2009-travel-snarled-deadly-winter-storm/story?id=9384561&page=1>.

Monday, November 1, 2010

Credibility of Sources (Essay #3)

  • http://www.nowpublic.com/environment/blizzard-2009-snow-totals-new-england-dc-ny-nj-snow-totals-2541969.html
    • Determine the credibility - Yes!
    • Explain why - December 20, 2009 Jon Azpiri wrote the article on Now Public Crowd Powered Media. The source looks more of a secondary source yet not biased. The source looks more of a blog style website then a news article.
    • Will you keep this source? - Yes or no, I haven't decided just yet.
    • Determine the credibility - Yes! ...
    • Explain why - Colin Beaven's website does look like he got his information from another source making it a secondary source yet this information seems reliable. The author is stated and the publishing/copy right date; 2009-10, is present. The information is not biased since the blizzard of 2009 is not really a topic you can be biased.
    • Will you keep this source? - Yes, I want to keep the source.
    • Determine the credibility - Yes!
    • Explain why - Frederick County Public Schools' website has the information and policies available for the parents and people of the community to see. The site is a primary source of their information yet has no author(s) besides what office the policy will effect. The dates of each "amendment" are available when they are made. Nothing is biased in the website; only policies and what is required within the school system.
    • Will you keep this source? - Yes, I will keep this source. Don't let me down, FCPS.
    • Determine the credibility - Yes!
    • Explain why - ABC News is a credible primary source to cite for my college paper. The authors are stated who are Lisa Stark, John Ryan and Michael S. James and published first on December 20, 2009. The topic of the blizzard of 2009 will not be a biased topic making the information balanced.
    • Will you keep this source? - Yes, I will keep this source. I feel comfortable enough to use the information from ABC News in my paper.